omg the ending of this, i swear to god it had me yelling "OMG YOU JUST DIDN'T DO THAT OMG" irl (i didn't get it until the last minute). but it's a fantastic fic, ending included!

Omg, that ending totally caught me off guard! I was expecting happy-happy-joyjoy, and:

D:

Poor Harry; Poor Draco.

Thank you for a nice, long read. This fic has kept me well-entertained for the last three days.

(faire_weather on LJ)

You bitch! How could you do that! ARGHHHHH!! Just when...and then! BANG!

But anyway, great story, loved the new characters, I always like your OC´s, and especially like the little details and the realism. AND you write sex like none...
But, as the ending drew near, I knew you kill someone, just like in `Camelot` (liked that one too). Really, there´s no need to kill them, just let them live quiet long, long lives.. on well.. Very satisfaying nonetheless.
ps.: `Rio de Janiro` is Rio de Janeiro and there are no earthquakes there. (I schould know, I´m brazilian).
ps2.: Narcissa Malfoy rocks my socks.

Eeekk!!!!! Ack! OMG! That was just... BRILLIANT!!!! I mean, from start to finish! I LOVE how you use the tone and the characterizations so SPOT ON from the novels, but also took it in an entirely different direction! I mean, SO funny, and the plot!!! SO clever! And yikes, I'm raving like a lunatic, but I can't stop because GAH!!!! I mean, I just loved it from beginning to end, and the end freakin blew me away!!!!! OMG.

Eeekk!!!!! Ack! OMG! That was just... BRILLIANT!!!! I mean, from start to finish! I LOVE how you use the tone and the characterizations so SPOT ON from the novels, but also took it in an entirely different direction! I mean, SO funny, and the plot!!! SO clever! And yikes, I'm raving like a lunatic, but I can't stop because GAH!!!! I mean, I just loved it from beginning to end, and the end freakin blew me away!!!!! OMG.

-sighs-
Near the end of the story I broke down and was forced to check the ending for myself. Because I couldn't stand it and I knew the reviews said it was sad.

I think the characterics were a bit faulty on Draco's part for a couple of the times, and Dudley was so damn amazing here (while I'd guess he's not exactly canon- still amazing) I even love the backstory and his friends and the rape and everything.

I don't know. It's a great story, and I enjoyed reading it because it made me howl with laugher and nearly choke myself on my own spit, so that's always a bonus.

The ending, the whole sudden attack of the Pensive and what I'm guessing is Harry's plan to go to his death and kill Voldie and all of that. I feel a bit cheated out of the entire story, after everything that happened, for it just to end on such a melancholy note. It doesn't seem to be as smooth as it is, but this story did bring those terrible pangs to my stomach, so I guess it's fine.

oh no. no! you bitch. you horrible, horrible bitch.

from "two months later" on i was seriously confused, until i got so lost in the pensieve that i forgot we were in one, and then we weren't anymore and i couldn't understand what had happened until suddenly i did. and i hate you forever. where is the "smilie" with tears running down its little yellow face?

and i told all my friends to read it. except i said "only the end, when you figure out what she's done (it took me a heartbeat or three) is a hideous kick of pain. so don't read this if you need a happy ending."

so.. there. nyah. sob.

yeah, there's a review in here somewhere, i'm just too upset to tease it into coherence. plus i stayed up till 2am to finish this thing so that doesn't help.

I think my heart actually came out of my chest at the end. Unlike others, I won`t begrude you that; it worked for me.

Overall, this was such a well-characterized story and I loved the pace. I admit to being thrown off by the two-months jump (because I would`ve loved to see how you might`ve written those months in the present, rather than Pensieve!Retrospect), but this was seriously fantastic. Times like these I can forget the feeling that he HP fandom is over. Maybe it never will be.

That was amazing what happened and where did harry go?

oh nooohh
Wow, this is a great story!
The ending caught me by surprise though.
I liked how you built up their friendship and then love!
And how you included both Dudley and Pierce and even new characters like Cherub and made it believable that they could get along.
about the ending though.

thanks for sharing your story

This was great.
I've reading it instead of studying for my exams and tutorials today, and I must say it was worth it. I liked how you developed the relationships between the persons in a natural way. I would have liked a longer end though, because I got the feeling you grew tired of the story and just wanted to end it fast - this could have been more than it is. It's a wonderful story though, and I liked the plot a lot, it felt new, although it used clichés, but what HP/DM doesn't use them nowadays? Your writing stile was good too, I like your language.

I would be glad to read more of your work.

Oh my gosh
That was absolutely fantastic, the ending was such a shocker!
I was actually in tears haha, just wow!
I really don't know what else to say...

I'm still in the midst of processing this story so my thoughts might be jumbled up and unclear.
But I honestly, honestly, honestly loved this.

I know your ending was not well recieved by many because it was so unexpected and so out of the blue and painful and it went against all the happiness this story has led you to believe, but it was perfect. I would've felt cheated if it had been any other.

Maybe it was because the tone of the story was never happy to begin with. I feel that even though it has provided many laughs, it has opened up many sub genres of humour, the story was dark with a twisted style that just, it was subtle. It was subtle that it doesn't really present itself until the very end when it just slams into you and you just go "oh".

The characterisations were, the characters were flawed but beautiful, make believe but real at the same time. They hurt you, they dig deep inside you and they may seem eccentric and unrealistic until you think about it, and you think about the people around you and you just appreciate them for their beauty. And their dystopian point of view. I loved Cherub. I would, I would i dunno, send him flowers or something. The lack of Ron and Hermione were perfect. I missed them, but only because Harry missed them.

Your ending. I dunno how to convey the feeling I have for your ending and the magnificence of it without babbling a few pages. It was, I didn't expect it but I kinda felt it was coming anyway. Nothing of that magnitude no. I thought maybe Harry would injure himself. But you have been hinting. You have been hinting. Harry's need to get rid of the Dark Lord, his indifference to death. Draco's suggestion of cutting his head off. I just, I felt it, deep down inside, maybe all of us would have known it. But you shook us. It was like an awakening. And what an awakening it was.

Truthfully, I am way too floored by this tale of deception, of hurt and of pure innocence to say anything even worth reading about it. I am not yet able to arrange the jumbles in my head to present you with a review that you and this story rightfully deseve and maybe I will come by and leave you one in the days that follow but i just wanted you to know how happy I am, how pleased I am to have taken the time to read this story even though I half didn't want to. Because this turned out to be, inevitably, one of the most painful, most heartbreaking, most beautiful fic this fandom could've brought forth.

Thank you so much.