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Re:Quantum Leap...by Scoradh 9 Years, 9 Months ago
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You bitch! How could you do that! ARGHHHHH!! Just when...and then! BANG! But anyway, great story, loved the new characters, I always like your OC´s, and especially like the little details and the realism. AND you write sex like none... But, as the ending drew near, I knew you kill someone, just like in `Camelot` (liked that one too). Really, there´s no need to kill them, just let them live quiet long, long lives.. on well.. Very satisfaying nonetheless. ps.: `Rio de Janiro` is Rio de Janeiro and there are no earthquakes there. (I schould know, I´m brazilian). ps2.: Narcissa Malfoy rocks my socks. 
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Re:Quantum Leap...by Scoradh 9 Years, 8 Months ago
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oh no. no! you bitch. you horrible, horrible bitch.  from "two months later" on i was seriously confused, until i got so lost in the pensieve that i forgot we were in one, and then we weren't anymore and i couldn't understand what had happened until suddenly i did. and i hate you forever. where is the "smilie" with tears running down its little yellow face? and i told all my friends to read it. except i said "only the end, when you figure out what she's done (it took me a heartbeat or three) is a hideous kick of pain. so don't read this if you need a happy ending." so.. there. nyah. sob. yeah, there's a review in here somewhere, i'm just too upset to tease it into coherence. plus i stayed up till 2am to finish this thing so that doesn't help.
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Re:Quantum Leap...by Scoradh 9 Years, 5 Months ago
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oh nooohh Wow, this is a great story! The ending caught me by surprise though. I liked how you built up their friendship and then love! And how you included both Dudley and Pierce and even new characters like Cherub and made it believable that they could get along.  about the ending though. thanks for sharing your story
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Re:Quantum Leap...by Scoradh 9 Years, 2 Months ago
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Oh my gosh That was absolutely fantastic, the ending was such a shocker! I was actually in tears haha, just wow! I really don't know what else to say...
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Re:Quantum Leap...by Scoradh 8 Years, 11 Months ago
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I'm still in the midst of processing this story so my thoughts might be jumbled up and unclear. But I honestly, honestly, honestly loved this.
I know your ending was not well recieved by many because it was so unexpected and so out of the blue and painful and it went against all the happiness this story has led you to believe, but it was perfect. I would've felt cheated if it had been any other.
Maybe it was because the tone of the story was never happy to begin with. I feel that even though it has provided many laughs, it has opened up many sub genres of humour, the story was dark with a twisted style that just, it was subtle. It was subtle that it doesn't really present itself until the very end when it just slams into you and you just go "oh".
The characterisations were, the characters were flawed but beautiful, make believe but real at the same time. They hurt you, they dig deep inside you and they may seem eccentric and unrealistic until you think about it, and you think about the people around you and you just appreciate them for their beauty. And their dystopian point of view. I loved Cherub. I would, I would i dunno, send him flowers or something. The lack of Ron and Hermione were perfect. I missed them, but only because Harry missed them.
Your ending. I dunno how to convey the feeling I have for your ending and the magnificence of it without babbling a few pages. It was, I didn't expect it but I kinda felt it was coming anyway. Nothing of that magnitude no. I thought maybe Harry would injure himself. But you have been hinting. You have been hinting. Harry's need to get rid of the Dark Lord, his indifference to death. Draco's suggestion of cutting his head off. I just, I felt it, deep down inside, maybe all of us would have known it. But you shook us. It was like an awakening. And what an awakening it was.
Truthfully, I am way too floored by this tale of deception, of hurt and of pure innocence to say anything even worth reading about it. I am not yet able to arrange the jumbles in my head to present you with a review that you and this story rightfully deseve and maybe I will come by and leave you one in the days that follow but i just wanted you to know how happy I am, how pleased I am to have taken the time to read this story even though I half didn't want to. Because this turned out to be, inevitably, one of the most painful, most heartbreaking, most beautiful fic this fandom could've brought forth.
Thank you so much.
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